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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hello, darling! So, I know you've been requesting from me for this story, but let's do away with that from here on out. Mainly because I'm not patient enough to wait, and because I just saw (for some reason??) your Minerva story, and I want to start that. But I want to caught up with this first.

So if you have any specific concerns for the chapters five of this, and the future chapters, *please* PM them to me. That way we both win.. I can review at the speed I want without having to worry that you are online when I open my slots, and you can still list any concerns you have for me to pay special attention to. You're more than welcome to do this when I start your McGonagall story, as well!

Anyway, onto my fangirling I'm about to do for this chapter...

Oh my gosh! I am so happy this was the scene you decided to use from Pride and Prejudice because it's *perfect*! I'm not disappointed that you'll be making this novel your own, I'm actually really excited about it, but I'm still thrilled that you used this scene. I'm giving you big huge lovely puppy eyes right now.

And Rose's humor. Well, your humor I suppose, is just so fitting for the time period. I love dry humor and so far this is filled with the perfectly placed little tidbits of it.

I really liked the peek into Victoire and Teddy's life, I'm actually excited to learn more about all the Weasley/Potter/Lupins during this time frame. It's just like learning about a new character but with that 'oh I know them' feeling. Am I making sense? This is what happens when it's a 'because I want to' review, I tend to just a bit mushy and kind of squiggle things together.

I just can't get over how much I love stepping back into time with your story, it's wonderful!

See you soon, and really don't hesitate on the offer to PM me concerns for chapters with this or the Minerva story!! I'm going to review them anyway; I want you to get as much out of my reviews as you can.. and not just mushy squiggles of words!!

Author's Response: Hello! I'm sorry to have taken so long to respond - it was a delight to receive this review from you, as I was waiting to snag a spot in your review queue. It means a lot that you wanted to come and read the rest of your story on your own. It's what I hope for when requesting reviews or doing exchanges, but it still manages to be a rare thing to find the right person for a story. Whenever you're able to read the rest, please do and enjoy it! That's what matters most. :D

It's great that you liked how I used that scene. It's such an iconic one in the whole hate/hate type of relationship emerging from Austen's novel, so I couldn't resist including it. And you like Rose's humour too! You're doing a very job of making this author happy. :P I wasn't sure if that aspect of the humour was going too far, but it is an interesting part of her personality, both letting her rebel and relieve the stress of awkward situations.

Hopefully I'll be able to include more information about the larger family as I continue. I add it as I go depending on what seems necessary to provide background or, I'll admit it, fill up a scene. *hides* But it would be fun to do something on Teddy and Victoire's relationship because it would provide a nice contrast to the dysfunctional relationships of Rose/Scorpius and... others. Thank you for that idea - it's got the wheels turning in my head now, which is always a good thing!

Also thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter! I really appreciate it! ^_^

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