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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
For some reason, I’ve never been a fan of song fics. I can’t quite pinpoint what it is, but I suspect that it’s the random lyrics threaded through the story- they really break up the flow for me – and unless I can hear the tune in my head, they make no sense either. :P

However, I actually had a great time reading this. I love the song you chose (it worked so well with the plot), and I’m always going to be thinking of this story if I listen to it from now on!

I liked the way you wrote Snape. You managed to capture all his yearning and love and regrets all into one neat little package, and the overall effect was really quite powerful. The imagery and metaphors were fantastic.

My heart goes out to Severus, as it always does when reading Snape/Lily. There’s something so pathetic and yet loveable about the tragedy that is Snily. This was a very heartbreaking piece of writing!

One thing I’d just comment on is that I don’t think the dialogue between Snape and Dumbledore at the end is necessary! The story is really great without it, and you don’t need it in there.

I’ve had so much fun reading all your stories! You are a truly talented writer. :D Thank you for all your commitment to Ravenclaw and Quoth the Raven *hugs*

-Annon ♥

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