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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Whoa. So this was quite different to your other stuff that I’ve read, but gosh, it was so good!

It was actually a little confusing at the beginning, but that confusion really added to the creepy/mysterious tone of the whole story so it wasn’t a negative point at all!

I like the theme of fear. It’s more of a classic ‘monsters in the woods’ fear but those fears are really not to be underestimated. Especially if the monsters are real ones. My heart was beating so fast while I read this, until I finally got to the end things were explained. I know that sometimes the ‘I woke up and it was all a dream’ ending is not preferable, but it seemed to work here.

I wonder why you chose James in particular to be the main character? Was that a deliberate choice, or random? Just fascinated ;)

I enjoyed the drama in this piece! And, as always, it was extremely well written.

-Annon ♥

Author's Response: Hey again! :)

I'm so glad that you thought it was different from my other stuff, since I did write this for an "Out of your comfort zone" kind of challenge. I've never written Action before or written from the perspective of a child so it was definitely something different.

I'm glad that you found there was a mysterious kind of tone of the whole story, since yes, the main theme is pretty much fear! I know the "I woke up and it was all a dream" is probably a bit of a cliche ending, but it is the easiest way to end a nightmare, and it's nightmares where you can have anything happening! :P

I think I chose James because the nightmare I had in mind had something to do with the Ford Anglia and spiders, so I wanted someone close to Harry/Ron who would know of the time when they actually did go into the Forbidden Forest. However, I'm not exactly sure why I chose James over someone like Albus or Hugo.. so good question, even though I'm sorry I don't really have a real answer..

Anyway, thank you so much for the awesome review! I really appreciate it Annon! :)

- Charlotte

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