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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:

Oh my gosh! I don’t know what to say :’) This is wonderful. Seriously.

Somehow, you manage to make Terry Boot sound like an insane creeper, but also really adorable and loveable at the same time! It’s quite mind boggling really and I’m not sure how you did it, but I completely loved it!

He’s been ‘observing’ her for four years. Not stalking. Of course not. :P

Aw, I was so sad when Cedric beat him to asking Cho out, but honestly Cho didn’t seem very nice in this so I think Terry deserves better, haha! But gosh, this just played out so beautifully in my mind, like a theatre production or something. It was so funny.

It was a nice, uncomplicated plotline too- if you’d tried to squeeze in any sub-plots or deep meanings or metaphors I think it would’ve taken something away from the pure simplicity and imagery that your writing creates.

I want a terry boot stalker too!

:D ♥

Author's Response: Hey Annon!

Ahh thank you! I'm glad the creepiness of stalking/observing wasn't too creepy :P I think part of that may be because I kinda portrayed him very pitifully... haha. I guess I wanted to reader to feel sorry for Terry and get on his side.. but yeah, Terry definitely does deserve better than Cho! I don't think I've ever been that great at expressing emotions in stories, but I'm glad that sadness came through!

Thank you so so much for all your nice comments! You are much too nice! & agreed - as long as the stalker was as nice as Terry! :P

- Charlotte

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