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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Hi Lottie! ♥

Iím here all the way from QTR-land to drop by some well-deserved reviews as a thank you for being so awesome. Also, I just canít believe Iíve never read anything of yours before! I was pleased to get the chance to check out your writing. :D

This was one of the cutest things ever! :3 Iíve read a few unrequited-love-sirius-fangirl one-shots, but this had that extra fluffy, feel-good dimension that the others didnít. I like the fact that Sienna actually ends up with Sirius in the end, thatw as an interesting way to end things! I was expecting something more angsty, I have to say :P

This was a really great one-shot. Youíve sort of used the plot of so many novels (girl in love with boy, asks friend of boy to help her get him if she helps him) and then shown them all up by proving how much more refreshing it is to read as a one-shot! You didnít need it to be any longer; this was the perfect length- and the way you described everything made it seem so realistic too!

I like Sienna as a character. She seems quite down to earth- realising that she doesnít really want to be just another giggling fangirl. So instead, she makes a plan, and gets what she wants in the end. A girl who knows what she wants, and actually goes out to get it, instead of sitting and whining about it! :D

It was sweet and well written and lovely and light-hearted and a very nice story. I loved it!

-Annon

Author's Response: Hey Annon!

My response to this is way overdue, but I just want to say a massive thank you for all your reviews - they're so lovely and YOU are totally awesome! :D

Aw thank you. I think it is rather fluffy and I do always like happy endings√ʬĬ¶ I'm a little surprised you thought it was the perfect length - most people have said the huge jump from beginning to end was a bit abrupt, but thank you!

Ahh just thanks so much for such a wonderful review! You really made my day with all of them :)

- Charlotte


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