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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Hello :)

This was really clever. I love the way you broke the piece into Ďscenesí Ė it reminded me very much of a play actually. I could see each scene acting out in my head, and even though you donít reveal who Isabellaís ďmagic boyĒ is, that just adds a whole new level of intrigue. I donít know why, but I was imagining the magic boy as Scorpius from the beginning. :D

Itís really beautiful and sensitive :3 I sort of want to smile and cry at the same time because Iím not sure whether this is happy or sad. I know itís about the boy leading Isabella on, but perhaps that was just Isabellaís perception? Iím not sure. There are lots of different ways you could interpret this!

Isabella is interesting. We donít really get to know all that much about her, but I donít think we need to. Itís section three that fascinates me the most Ė especially the part where sheís yelling to be heard over a Ďstormí and the boy is saying that itís quiet here (but ta the same time seems to understand). I sense that there are layers of meaning and itís very mysterious but delicious! ;)

The ending was brilliant. I love the way it ties into the title.

wonderful :3

-Annon ♥

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