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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Hi Jordan!

I totally see about that paradox-type-thing at the beginning! And I know that thatís really not the thing to be getting excited about in this chapter, but I just never thought about that before. Indescribable is an adjective, and so it is describing! That makes it an oxymoron, right? ErmÖ donít answer that. Iím probably wrong :P

One thing I didnít understand in this chapter was why Alice said she didnít want to be Ďgottení? I thought she fancied him? Iím confused! Oh, waitÖwas she just saying that because she couldnít exactly tell him she liked him?

But anyway, YAY! A+A MIGHT BE HAPPENING. EE. SO HAPPY. I canít wait to find out a bit more about Albus, actually, because we donít know all that much about him yet apart from the fact that heís a bookworm.

I noticed that the dialogue was really natural and flowing in this chapter- and it has been in the previous chapters as well, but there was just less of it. Albus and Alice have loads of sexual tension between them, haha. :D Iím all excited about their relationship now, and just hope that James doesnít do something silly and mess it up for them.

Wow, this has been so much fun to read. Iím really sad that youíve abandoned it and still canít believe that I only realised it after Iíd written all your reviews (so if any of them don't quite make sense that could be why. there i go making excuses :P)!! I think it was a great story though. :D

-Annon ♥

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