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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Hey :)

Gah, I am just feeling more and more sorry for Alice! Her sister Raina wonít even speak to her because she thinks sheís too much of a loser? Ouch. Thatís gotta hurt. It was an imaginative twist to put in there though!

Crikey, I hate James! Heís god-awful. And a prat. And a bully. AndÖyeah. I hoped he gets whatís coming to him in the end!

Iím loving all the subtle soda references and analogies that you include throughout this. It adds a really unique flavour and creative twist thatís also really relatable. Plus, itís a really good analogy, the Ďlike a soda caní one. I often see really awful analogies that make no sense whatsoever, but itís not the case here.

Wow, whatís Albus so desperate to see her again for? I keep imagining all the possible scenarios that might take place, in which Alice actually tells him her real name. :P

You have a reallyÖsort ofÖprecise writing style, if that makes sense. Itís quite delicate but powerful and the emotion is all there. Really nice! Iím enjoying reading this a lot.

On to the next chapter!!

-Annon ♥

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