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Review:True Author says:
Hello! It's True Author with your requested review! =]

Blanca's OWL results! So she's a sixth year now! Anyways, as I told you in my first review (I think I told you ;) you can create tension. I really liked the way you showed Blanca's nervousness and everything in the first and this chapter too. The exam results tension is perfectly written.

I actually liked Scorpius's characterization too. He's a nice, decent boy but still in his heart he's a bit selfish just like his father. He loves Rose and he's helping Blanca because she's Rose's friend. This shows a small amount of selfishness in his heart.

"you canít be threatened by a Hufflepuff!Ē Hmm... I never thought Malfoy had any problem with Hufflepuffs but don't mind this, it's just a personal opinion!

Another nice chapter. :)

Author's Response: hi, thanks for the review. i'm glad that you like scorpius' characterization and i'm glad you got the tension...i was not sure about it when writing
about malfoy and hufflepuffs, i also don't think he has anything against them but i sort of put that to kind of show that they look down upon hufflepuffs because they are stereotyped to be daft and clueless about everything..
thankyou so much for reading it, i really appreciate it.


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