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Review:BKL8008 says:
So they just dont care? Flynn asked, and there were murmurs of agreement. - I think this was the most powerful line in this, and a bit foreshadowing? As Sheriff once pointed out about the 2nd DH film, when the Slytherins were sent to the dungeons, "what about the Firsties?"
I'm really worried about Flynn. I don't think the chapter was choppy at all. In fact, it sets the stage for a lot more to happen. Well done.

Author's Response: I love that line. :) Especially coming from Flynn . and me, foreshadow? Never ...

I'm worried about Flynn, too, but you know why. :) I'm glad you like it, thank you so much for the review, and I can't wait to write the next chapter.

Ellie


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