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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Grrr, I really don't like Benjamin >:/ He's ruining poor Marta's chance of making friends! How come he has it in for Remus though and is okay with Sirius? I can't remember if you specified a reason for it or not :p

Anyways, I like where the story is going and I can't wait to read more about Marta's relationship with the Marauders, Matthew, Benjamin and maybe Lily and her friends? Hmmm :)

I'm also looking forward to get to read some more Quidditch scenes :D I bet you're good at writing those!

Anyways, great chapter!


Author's Response: Then it looks like you and Marta have something in common! Remember, Benjamin likes Purebloods like James and Sirius, but Remus is just a half-blood (as far as Benjamin knows). Further reasons will be clarified later.

It's good to hear you like this story! The other characters have to compete with Benjamin and his antics. As for Quidditch, the first match is just around the corner! And yes, I enjoyed writing those scenes. Quidditch is a big part of this story since it's the only place Benjamin can't follow.

Thanks for another review! It was lovely hearing your thoughts! :)

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