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Review:Faith100z says:
Hi!! All right, so I found this really interesting to read. I felt like you went really in depth with the phobia, and also managed to make the reader feel sorry for poor Aria.

I thought the flow was really good. The whole Al-being-a-pyschologist thing was an interesting take on his character, but I kind of like it :) I can imagine him trying to "fix" all of his cousins' issues all the time. :P

I feel like you told the story in a very realistic way, but it was still creative and unique! If there was one tiny thing I would suggest, maybe more description in the first half? The story was really great though, awesome job! :)
- Faith

Author's Response: Hello there!
I'm glad you found it interesting to read! :) I did heaps of research on this phobia, it just wouldn't have been a good fic if I hadn't - so at least it showed! :D
I'm happy about the flow, I always worry about that! Al-the-Psychologist was unique, I'd never read it and most people don't really have a working knowledge of things like this - so I needed a character who liked psychology! :p
I'm glad my story is realistic yet creative! :D
I might go back and add more description in later, when I have a bit more time! I'll definitely add something there, thanks for the tips! :)
Thank you for reviewing! :D
P.S. Sorry if this doesn't make sense - I've had a jam-packed week and even though it's quarter past seven, I'm ridiculously tired. :p

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