I LOVE teen pregnancy stories ♥ (I'm weird), and I LOVE James Sirius ♥, so of course I love this.♥
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the fact it's from James' POV, I mean the only teen preg story I've read from the baby daddy's POV is Hormones by Mistress.
And I LOVE James Sirius, he's awesome! ♥
I love his and Lily's conversations, soo sweet. I love the way you've portrayed Lily as well (she's one of my fav next gen's).
Best quote "No! Nick, you cannot get a pet platypus and keep it in our dorm!" - Ha I love it!! and the fact it's called Mr. Sprinkles - oh my god, I have tears of laughter :D
Oh and this quote - "Give Neville love. Or I will kill you. Thatís a promise." - Ginny seems awesome, can she be my mother?. I think it's brill and cute that James is such a mummy's boy :)
I can't wait to see Ginny and Harry's reactions when James/Selene tells them.
Albus Potter: what a player!!! I Love Albus, normally it's James who's the player not the other way around, so It's great to see it reversed.
One thing, the layout (the gaps at the beginning of each paragraph) was a bit annoying and it makes it a little hard to read, but you can easily get it fixed.
I LOVE the fight between James and Al, and then Lily who comes outta now where - the Potter kids are deffo insane but so loveable. Loads more laughs reading their 'family bonding'! LOL.
I'm not sure if your American but over here in the UK, it's grey not 'gray'.
Apart from that, loved it! :D
Ok, you seriously, seriously HAVE to update.
P.s I just realised how many times I used the word LOVE - whoops, fangirling overdrive.
Oh and if you ever fancy reading some next gen teen pregnancy - I write loads! :D
Author's Response: You're nice. I like you :)
One of the things I've noticed about this site is, although there are plenty of pregnancy and Next Gen stories, few of them are from a male perspective. So I decided to change that! (BTW, I've heard of Hormones, but have decided not to read it until I finish this story - wouldn't want to have any mix-ups. But I love all of Mistress' stories)
I absolutely adore writing James and Lily. I love writing about siblings - probably because I have three of them, myself. And I'm so excited to write more Ginny. Her letters have been my absolute favorite so far.
I really wanted this story to really the only cliche in this story to be the teenage pregnancy part. I really want to switch up a lot of the other norms - thus, Al being the "player" instead of James! Although for Al, he's only a player because he's too shy to talk to a girl he actually likes. Poor guy.
I am, indeed, American. As for the whole "grey" vs "gray" thing, I've see it both ways all the time and frankly have no idea which one to use. Such is life.
Thanks for the review! You rock!