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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
This is great so far! Flora can be snooty sometimes but I like how she cares for her family so much, even if it does make her a bit uptight and worried about appearances :)
Albus quite the angsty teenager haha. He seems pretty immature and obnoxious sometimes -he really hasn't been treating that Flora well- but he's sweet sometimes. I loved how he was caring and nice when she seemed upset ♥ but it wasn't nice of him to scare her. At least he got chastised by the worker :)
At the same time, though, I probably would have done what he did...haha. All in good fun and whatnot.
Oh and I thought it was cute when she teased him about being "deep" and he petulantly said "shut up." and stomped off. Just a cute moment ♥
Update soon! I'm looking forward to seeing where they go next!

Author's Response: aw, thank you so much! flora is very snooty, there is no two ways about it. she thinks she's one step off being the queen's daughter. but she really does adore her family.
albus is basically an angsty teenager, there is no other way to phrase it. he never really grew up from hogwarts because everyone loved him there so he stayed the same, and so now he is just like one big obnoxious man child. which doesn't please dear flora very much. yeah, he wasn't very nice to her when he tried to pull a trick on her, but the worker set him right.
i would do that to my best friends without a second though, haha :)
yeah, he's a little child inside. he doesn't like being told off and he doesn't like his masculinity being insulted, haha :D
thank you so much! and the next chapter will be up very soon, i promise.

ellie :) xx

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