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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling!!!

I am really starting to like next Gen, people can do so many different things! This is the first I've read that features Lucy as the protagonist, and I really enjoy it so far! She seems like such an ignored character, and anytime I read about Molly she's some prissy spinster, anyway.. I really like your different take on things so far!

I think Lucy is a very humorous head to be inside. She's sarcastic but clearly very sweet. Her love for her family is evident, and it's easy to see with the fact that she has two close friends out of the Wotter family, that she's also well liked. Also, let me tough on that Wotter bit- Almost every next gen fic I've read involves the cousins being best friends with only the cousins, apart from Scorpius and Al, and of course the Gryffindor Quidditch team. Anyway, I think it's neat that Lucy has her own friends but is very close with her cousins.

The bit about it mattering most what Lily thought as really sweet. I think we all have those people in our lives that we just want to please for no specific reason, and I loved that it was Lily.

I was so sure that Molly was going to announce that she and Tristan Evergreen were going to elope when Jenna asked for the date of the wedding! And Tristan Evergreen.. omg just the name makes me want to swoon! I can't wait to meet him!!

I love the setting you had for the bridal shop as well. As someone who has been in at least 20 wedding dress shops, that is incredibly accurate. They are not happy if you don't plan on buying something, haha.

This is such a fun start, I'm excited to see what comes next!

Author's Response: Hiya, love!

That's good, because there's loads of fantastic Next Gens out there that got me interested in this era in the first place :D Is it really? Well, then I feel flattered. I've also read a lot of Molly's and yeah, I wanted to explore mine :p I do like taking things and interpreting them differently, so I'm glad you noticed!

Aww, that's sweet, Jami, I like to think Lucy's a little based on me, somewhat. I know, right? I mean, I love my family, but you wouldn't want them to be hanging around you all of the time, so I gave Lucy her own friends but still leave her time for Lily and Hugo. I've always thought that Lucy and Lily would be really close, so I'm quite pleased you liked that too!

lololol really? That's an interesting idea *thinking face on* But so far, you're the closest to guessing why Molly's so hush-hush about the wedding so ;) I love Tristan's name, it'll be fun to write him - expect him around the Christmas holidays, and if not then, the last chapter (which is the wedding itself, and that's all I'll say) for sure.

Thank you! I tweaked this chapter a lot during the summer, because of some lovely, helpful reviews I got in its unedited state, so you're the first person to review on this chapter afterwards, so I'm glad you liked it. See you around, Jami, and thanks so much for such a kind, helpful review *squish*

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