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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here from the forums with your super awesomely late review!! :S So sorry! I meant to leave one for the last couple of days and man...RL is annoying sometimes! But I'm here now! :)

I'm glad you requested a Remus story! :D He's my favorite adult character in the series (hence the penname) and I've never read a story where he is recruited for the first war.

The first thing that drew me in was the narrative. Right off the bat I was transported into McGonagall's office waiting along with her for Remus. I really liked how she can see Remus shift from a teen to a serious human being, something I always imagined Remus do. You actually wrote something that I wish I had thought of in my own Remus fic!

"She saw it in his eyes two years ago, unbridled fear that nearly crippled him, when he started stammering about packing his bags and leaving the grounds following that unpleasant incident with Mr Snape."-- I JUST wrote a chapter about the prank on Snape and as soon as I read that, in my head I went "why didn't I think of that! It's definitely something Remus would do!!" Hahaha, so yeah! Even the little details you give is through McGonagall about Remus, he feels so well in character. His movements, the way he looks...you kept it very well in check which I really like. Some authors completely forget that he's a werewolf and the way they describe him is almost perfect if you get what I mean.

I really like how Minerva is actually struggling to recruit him. She has seen him grow up and despite being just a teacher she cares for him and the last thing that she wants is to put him-or any of them for that matter-in any sort of danger. However, it is a war and it has to be done.

Anyway, this was a great moment in Remus' life and you definitely added a moment that I never thought about reading. You said that it wasn't been Beta and quiet honestly I couldn't tell! So kudos on that because I can't manage it to save my life. Hahaha!

Thanks for the request! :D

--Rosie

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