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Review:Dezire_427 says:
Yes, yes, i'm actually reviewing right after reading a chapter. Yay for me!

When I read the summary for this chapter, I was like, "Shut Up!" and abandoning my maths homework, which, incidentally, needs to be submitted tomorrow, got to reading it...

...And was utterly and completely shattered. Val, you pure, unadulterated, 100% idiot! What do I even say. I don't have words. You didn't listen to me or Laura, and now look where its got you. You've got nothing. There's something seriously messed up in that pretty little head of yours. You've really treated James very unfairly, and right now, I wish I could slap you hard. But I can't, so Laura, would you do the honours?

And I still believe Val's family and friends were at fault, for being so non-understanding and all that jazz, but seriously, what has James ever done, other than being nice to you and helping you and goshdarn hell! Faith Valentina Sullivan, when the guy says he loves you, why do you shout at him? WHY, YOU PATHETIC MORON?!

I hope you regain your senses. I hate writing such a hateful review for you, Val.

Btw, Lessie? Laura, could you provide me with a description of that vile girl? Thing is, I intend to find a picture resembling her on google, printing it, then stabbing it with a butter knife, and watching with a smile as it burns.

Sadistic? Good. That's what i'm hoping to achieve.

I don't hate you for this chapter, Laura. All my hatred is directed towards Lessie, for invading the privacy of and being a *insert nasty swear word, that, incidentally, sounds very similar to 'snitch'* towards her so called 'best friend and said 'best friend' for cold-heartedly rejecting and publically insulting our dear James. You, however, continue to remain the apple of my eyes.

Feeling only slightly vindictive towards you-know-whos,

P.S. A thousand hugs to James. An adorable, sweet and nice boy as you doesn't deserve this. He deserves a chapter in his POV. *nudge, nudge, wink, wink!*

Author's Response: I felt so mean for the chapter description! I knew it would catch people's attention... and then I would later shoot down all their hopes in dreams. I feel like such a sadist. I kind of like it.

Gah! Val is a TOTAL idiot. Seriously! She's just so... disfunctional! Believe me, she's going to be doing some suffering in the next few chapters. Serious suffering. Because she was an idiot. Really truly an oblivious, cowardly idiot.

Lessie is short - about 5 feet 2 inches - with dark brown, slightly wavy brown hair. She's Greek and has sea green eyes. Lightly tanned skin and very petite. She's also unreasonably angry at Val. Stupid fiery Greek temper.

D'aww, thanks for still loving me. I REALLY didin't want to write this chapter because I knew it would be horribly upsetting. But it really is a key point in the plot, so it had to be done.

You're wonderful, my dear.


James is very thankful for the hugs. He's a very sad panda right now. You know, I hadn't originally planned any more James POV, but I might do that... or at least have a portion in his perspective, if nothing else. Beautiful idea.

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