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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
HUGO. FLITWICK. HAGRID. ADOPTED BABY UNICORNS FROM 'ADVENTURE' ~ So many feels in the first part! I love how you wrote Hogwarts' reaction to the lack of Tournament, the fact that even Flitwick couldn't anticipate this abject depression made it seem all the more profound.

I loved how you wrote the different Houses' and teachers' reactions, too - it made it seem a more personal experience, as well as a disaster on a crowd scale. Although I love how you've characterised Hagrid as degenerating into more of a creature over the years his speech was absolutely perfect! It had such a wonderful combination of wanting to laugh at Hagrid's words, and put on a brave/noble face because of the loss for the students. I just feel very involved with it, the way you write it.

Also the baby unicorns are gorgeous and I love them and please can Hogwarts raise an army of unicorns to welcome the Greenland elks? And maybe feed them all Ghosted Flakes, because that was a brilliant pun?

But I loved Cedric and Hugo's interaction in the bathroom! Cedric was suitably caring, but mysterious and clever (and sad) too. I love how you write Hugo's thought processes, too, because it means that we get to see them both in different lights and why Hugo does things the way he does. Hee I can't wait to see how he'll react when he realises that this ghost is the reason the Minister cancelled the Tournament :D or how Cedric will react to the news! I'm just very excited about what will happen in general; how Hugo will pull everything together to make it work for him.

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