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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
Oh my goodness, this chapter - I didn't know whether to laugh or groan for poor Percy, as Flitwick uncovered the botch of matters he'd made. I absolutely love how you described Percy's shock and realisation at each new revelation, because it really gave us a feel for how much it means, since we're not used to this Greenland-hated, Flitwick-led atmosphere yet (well, perhaps Flitwick being in power is a little less foreign since he was there to awkwardly patch things over in 'Adventure').

You characterise both the characters so well throughout, and I feel so sorry for both of them! You described them so I could picture them so well, and their interaction seemed spot-on. I so love Percy being Head of International Magical Co-Operation :D He's perfect for it, and his reprimanding of Flitwick made me laugh so much, because they were in such a 'naughty child being told off' situation!

I can't wait to find out where you take it from here, too, since all these new problems set out before us and Percy need sorting out - the Triwizard Tournament happening after all when the Minister is so against it, Greenland needing their elk being hired out (which I look forward to - the world needs more Flitwick riding elk). I just hope the man for job appears on the scene soon! :D

I also loved the little mentions of Rose and Percy's family - they were just nice reminders that the Weasleys are all in the background, a part of what is to come whether they like it or not. I hope we see more of her in this, too!

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