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Review:AmeliaQ says:
Hey again :P
Good chapter, a lovely homie chap!!
I hope you in the next chapter will have a bit more action, but very well written.
If I may have one critique point then it would that we don't know much about Holly.
How does she look?
Didnít she have any ambitions, she might have felt grounded at her parentsí home, but didn't she have dreams?
What about friends, boyfriends and family??
You are very good at portraying peopleís feelings.
So keep on going you are very good!!
(sorry about the š's they won't go away!!)

Author's Response: action in two chapters? If you're willing to wait, pretty please?
And I am editing the one I'm going to submit soon to include more about Holly. I often forget that what is in my head hasn't always gone into writing.
Thank you so much!

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