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Review:Alex says:
So this is my review of all of Delicate and Still Delicate. I just read all of it in the last 2 days and I loved them!! I've never read HPFF before so to be able to delve back into the world of Harry Potter was such an amazing treat and for that, I thank you. Also, I just want to say that i think you are an amazing writer. Your future should definitely be in writing!!

Okay, on to the more concrete reviews. At first, I didn't like that the main conflict was a pregnancy. It seemed too much like MTV's "16 & Pregnant." And it just didn't seem magical enough. That being said, it certainty made for a good story.

Also, I was very surprised that Al was in Slytherin!! I like that Gryffindor and Slytherin were getting along better and I enjoy the fact that Scorpius MALFOY is a good guy.

Now on to the character of Rose. She is such a whiny complainer!! Based on your A/N's I can tell that people were more Team Rose as opposed to Team Scorpius but I think that's crazy! I was even more Team Daisy then Team Rose because Daisy was so nice and also never did anything wrong. I thought Rose was way too moody and temperamental. I always was in Scorpius' corner. He never really did anything wrong, until the custody battle which I thought was terrible. But curiously, that was when Rose finally grew up and stopped being so insufferable.

I really enjoyed all the characters (although Rose was probably my least favorite--sorry) especially James, Jenny, Dom and even Molly.

The book was fantastic and you should be so proud of yourself!! Sorry about my complaints of Rose, I just don't have much tolerance for self-pity. I disliked how there were periods of deep depression but at least you kept some jokes in there to lighten the mood. I was laughing out loud so much which is pretty rare for a book. Keep writing!

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