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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Okay, so after reading "Naive", I had the burning urge to start reading this. I. Do. Not. Regret!

I love Phoebe. She seems so awesome already. And the last part just had me cracking up. Oh Louis! He's a beautiful being, so of course he'd have all the girls wrapped around his fingers. Poor Phoebe, rambling in French. :)

Okay, so my favorite part:


"Did the usual chef make this?" Sniff.
"Yes."
"Did he mistreat it in anyway?" Sniff.
"No."
"Did he cook it at perfect 180 degrees?" Sniff.
I HAVE NO IDEA! WHY DON'T YOU GO CHECK FOR YOUR SELF?! AND WHILE YOU'RE AT IT, GET A BLEEDING TISSUE!
"...Yes."
"Are you sure?"
"Yes."
"Good. Now leave,"


I can honestly say that I actually read this out loud and sniffed to add in affect. Poor Phoebe, having to deal with such an insufferable old woman. It's the typical sterotype though. Aren't crabby old women the best?

Well, I gots to go scamper off and read the next chapter :)

Author's Response: HELLO AGAIN!
I'm glad you don't regret reading this story! :D
I love Phoebe too, she's just so - I don't really know the word to put here but she was a lot of fun writing!
Louis is a beautiful being, I just wish he was real. :'(
Phoebe rambling in French was so cringey to write for me. I was like, 'NOOO WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!'
Is it weird that I get so involved with my characters? Meh.
Hahaha, that was fun to write! I actually sniff whenever I read it as well!
Old women, ugh. I used to work at a chemist and they are always so rude and crabby so I decided to channel my frustration through the crazy lady. :p
Thanks for reviewing! :D


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