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Review:Siriuslover177 says:
Hello, Siriuslover177 here,

This was an AMAZING story... oh my goodness. When you were describing everything in the beginning, that was absolutely amazing. It kept me on the edge on my seat the entire time.

And when everyone came in, to see if she was okay, I was getting chills, because she was in so much pain, and everyone was trying to help her, but there was nothing they could do.

And when her parents found out why she was freaking out, I felt so bad for them, because they seemed as if they were done with this phobia. That they just wanted it to end.

I understand why, because they most likely don't like seeing their daughter in pain, and because George, he had his best friend, his brother die, and now he is reminded daily about death by his daughter.

I feel really bad for Roxanne, because it is so hard on her. The ending truly broke my heart, how she was saying how she can fake it while it is light outside, but that once the night comes out, she is done for.

It was so powerful, and such and amazing story. I really, really liked this, great job.
Thank you for entering my challenge, and good luck.


Author's Response: Hi Sarah,

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you really understand where I'm coming from with this one-shot. I was originally worried that it might seem too much - too much detail or over the top, and I'm glad you don't seem to think so.

With this kind of disorder, I think the main feeling is being overwhelmes - almost that you can't cope, but you have to.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this and I look forward to the results :)

Keira x

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