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Review:Siriuslover177 says:
Hello,it's Siriuslover117,

This was a great story. I really had no idea how you were going to pull this phobia out, because the fear of ugly people is quite a difficult phobia to understand that it truly is real.

I really love how you pulled it off, how it was herself that she was afraid of, it was very creative, and very sad.

I really liked the idea of having Albus helping her get over her fear, and I really did like how in the end, she is still afraid, but she IS trying.

I wouldn't like it if after a day she is all good and dandy, because that isn't what happens. I like it that it was true, that real. You made it very realistic, and that is what I was looking for.

This was truly a good story, and it broke my heart as I was reading it.

Good luck, and thank you very much for doing my challenge.

~Sarah
Xxxx

Author's Response: Hello!
I was originally going to do a humour fic with Sirius/Marauders but then when I was researching it I realised how real it was! So then this little plunny popped up! :)
I'm glad to hear that I pulled it off well! It was quite hard to do!
I totally understand, someone isn't cured of a phobia after a few minutes - it can take up to years, so I couldn't make her completely perfect. I tried to make it as realistic as possible! :)
I'm so sorry that it broke your heart! That was never my intention! D:
I'm glad you liked it though! :D
Thank you so much for giving me this lovely review and the challenge was excellent! It was one of my favourite challenges so far! :D

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