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Review:Jordan says:
I like the story but I have had trouble reading it at some points you flicker between first and third anon points of view... For example: " She brought up her other hand to the other side of his face to try to make him turn his head to look at me."

Author's Response: Sorry about that. I am in the process of fixing all of that right now. This was my first story that I have ever wrote and I was learning my pov style. Thanks for checking it out and bring it to my attention.

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