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Review:True Author says:
Hello! It's True Author with your requested review! =]
I'm glad you found my last review helpful! I was actually going to read n review this one today :D
Anyways, you have started the second chapter with some nice scenes in it. This is a very important chapter as in this one, the reader begins to get interested in your well planned plot. :) Jane, as I said was perfect and I LOVED- "Lily, you see only what you want to see" ;) Nice one! haha
Some small corrections of grammar are there. for example “His arrogant," should be- "He's arrogant", “He’s the exception,” Lily muttered should be 'He's an exception." muttered Lily, and "The two talked all night" is correct, but I think, "They kept talking all the night" would be better. :) please correct them!
Work on the formatting of this chapter too. :)
Otherwise, nice chapter! Loved your plot!
I hope this was not a harsh review. I just want this story to be perfect without an error. cheers!
True Author :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Your reviews are so helpful :)
I didn't even notice those grammar mistakes, I'll go fix them up right now. Yeah, I love Jane too. There'll definitely be a lot of character development for everyone, as well as a better insight into each of the friendships in future chapters. The review wasn't harsh at all. You're telling me what I'm doing right and what needs improvement, which is incredibly helpful.

Thanks so much!

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