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Review:kjp says:
Hello there, i'm kelsey (kjp) from the Harrypotterfanfiction forums with your requested review :D (sorry I took so long to get to you- my life is so hectic at the minute)
Anyway on with the review- Your story has great style, its brilliant. You've put so much thought into the writing that it amazes me, you make every word count and make it having meaning.
I couldn't really tell you what the on-shot is about. I could tel it was about a man names Tobias... but other than that I really had no idea (Perhaps its me not paying attention) but it is something that perhaps you should make clearer to you readers.
You asked about imagery and you did send that across well with detail that came in every word you wrote.
Your story is good and i'd probably recommend it to someone else but i think you need to sort out making it more clear.
8/10 from me :D
- kjp

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for reviewing.

I'm glad you like my style. Yes, I like to make every word count - I'm not really into tons and tons of words - concise, I always say.

I understand your confusion (perhaps looks at JChrissy and Violet Gryfindor's reviews for their interpretation). The thing about my writing is that I don't give readers the answers. You've got to figure it out on your own from what I've provided in the story - it's there, all the information you need to understand the story and make your own assumptions. The thing about my writing is that I leave it open so that readers can basically interpret it any way they want.

Thanks for your review! :)

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