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Review:LoopyLemon says:
This story is amazing. So completely amazing. I am astounded. I'm actually speechless. It was beautifully written, from beginning to end. I can't belive that Benjamin came back but in a way that is what made the story so tragically believable. I almost cried, the only thing that stopped me was Marta's own strength. She was such a beautifully strong character. I adored her from beginning to end. Benjamin was wonderfully horrible. I loved how he only referred to her as fourty-six after he faked exploding. You captured all your characters beautifully and didn't draw the story out any longer than it needed. I started reading this story expecting another cliche mauraders story and was beyond pleasently surprised. Marta was perfect and fitted perfectly in her surroundings. I don't know what else to say. I want to point out something that can be improved on but I literally have no idea. Everything worked so beautifully. This is exactly the type of story I love to read. Please take this story outside of hogwarts and make it into a book. The storyline is so wonderfully unique. I just adored the idea of an imaginary friend who seems like he is your friend and only there for you but is actually a curse. This story was beyond amazing. I know I'm rambling now but I really want you to know just how much I adored it. I left no reviews after the first chapter because I was far too focussed on finishing your story. The interaction between Benjamin and Marta was perfect and believable. All of your characters were real and three dimensional. I'm going to stop rambling now. Please keep writing.

Author's Response: It makes me smile, seeing how much you enjoyed the story. When in the process of writing, several people thought Benjamin's 'destruction' was too easy, and they were right. Benjamin cannot be destroyed. I'm glad you saw it all as believable and not to normal cliche Marauders story (I sometimes felt like I was under-using those guys).

I actually considered using this idea outside of Hogwarts. I liked Benjamin's character and his systematic methods. Unfortunately, I still have no idea how to make it work as well without the Hogwarts mythology and the Founders and magic. Maybe someday I'll get a spark, but in the meantime I'm content with Benjamin existing right where he is.

I understand the desire to just click to the next chapter without a pause, so don't worry about anything review-wise. I'm just happy hearing your thoughts here at the end. Thank you for reviewing! And yes, I will continue writing.

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