|Review:||The Last Marauder says:|
Sorry for the delay in reviewing, I was just very busy and a bit all over the place, anway, here it is!
I will say that I really hated Mrs Collingwood in this chapter, though I think that was your intention. I hated how she still disliked Remus and Tonks and the idea of Teddy even though they had taken her in and looked after her. I can see where she is coming from, after what had happened with her husband, but even still, she was just so unlikeable! I did like how Tonks said she had to help Remus recover after the full-moon, I did like her forcefulness there - trying to make her understand, Remus just has an illness, that is all, just an illness, he is normal regardless of that.
I really liked the little details you included, how the children did drawings of hippogriffs and the younger boy's drawing was the right colour but didn't look like a hippogriff, while the other girl's did, but was the wrong colour. That was such a nice piece of detail.
I also liked Tonks's explanation of Andromeda's attitude to Remus - how she knows that he makes Tonks happy, that he loves her and she him, and ultimately, that is all that matters, personal feelings aside.
I also liked that for a moment, at the start, you had Remus consider not helping her because of what she had done. I knew he would help her - because that is who he is, but he seemed more real when for a moment he had that small desire to give her a taste of her own medicine, you know?
Anyway another good chapter, and I am really looking forward to more (even though you did not end on a cliff hanger, I am still excited for the next chapter!!!). Anyway, well done and please update soon.
ps. I nominated 'Moonlight' for HPFF Classics: Best Novel Dobby Award in the forums! :-)
Author's Response: thanks! yeah that was my intention to make briony collingwood less than likeable. but i'm glad you liked the chapter overall. :)
and i'm so flattered you nominated my story, thank you! you have been one of my most awesome readers and i'm so glad to read your read your reviews! thank you. :D