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Review:True Author says:
Hello! I'm True Author with your rrquested review! =]
Hmm... I must say this is an interesting plot. :) Your story has plot clarity which is rarely found. You know what you are going to do after this don't you??
OMG and I just loved Jane!! I'm sure she and Sirius will be in love... I hope actually haha :D The charachterization is neatly done and grammar is good.
Please do a bit of work out on formatting. you need to reduce the spaces between two paragraphs and just look at the flow of your story. It sounds stiff in certain paragraphs like the one in which Sirius is lying on his bed.
I liked everything else!

Author's Response: Yay, a review!

Thanks so much. Yes, I know what I'm planning on doing for the rest of the story. It's all mapped out :) I love it when people like Jane! As an OC, you're never quite sure how people will respond.

About formatting, I always seem to have an issue when it comes to actually publishing the chapter. It looks nice and neat in Microsoft Word, but when I paste it to HPFF, all these massive spaces automatically appear. Thanks for mentioning it, I'll try to fix it, because it really annoys me too, haha. I agree, the paragraph were Sirius is in bed has always kind of bothered me. It does sound stiff. Thanks so much for the review. Overall, it sounded quite positive. Phew!


Thanks again :)

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