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Review:daretodream says:
Finally, a light in poor Charlie's life!

That horrible Skeeter woman did not publish that article! If I was Hermione, I would have immediately buried her. She could rot in Azkaban for all I care, it's not far off from what she deserves for treating other people like they're nothing but news specials.

Charlie came to the US! I got so excited, because he came to the area around where I'm from, so it kind of was like a little connection, though an unintentional one. You know how things like that in a story can be kind of funny and ironic?

I really like Liz. She's interesting and different! Plus, she's British but she's not. And she's nice to Charlie and has no connection to his past in the UK. Nothing about Liz is connected to Fred, which I think it something that Charlie needs right now.

This was definitely a case of the stars aligning, her starting work the very night that Charlies was planning on packing up and heading back home. I'm going to view it as destiny.

Oh, and by the way, I thought the line about Charlie pocketing the money once he really saw her was quite funny. That along with the comments about the inconvenience of travelling as a muggle! What I wouldn't give to be able to Apparate!

Great work!

~Cassie

Author's Response: Hi again!

Yes, unfortunately, Rita DID publish the article. And I agree, Hermione really should use her knowledge to get Rita in some deep trouble!

Haha; no way! That is so awesome! And I know exactly what you mean about having connections like that with stories that can be funny and ironic! It's happened to me a few times, too!

Awww, I'm SO glad that you like Liz! She's a brand-new OC and I've really tried to put a lot into her to make her a well-rounded out character (without being cliche or Mary-Sue)! And I agree, I think Charlie needs someone not connected to his past, too! :D

As for the stars aligning, well... we'll see! *winks* And hahaha! I'm glad you liked those lines; I was trying to aim for a little comedy in this chapter without making it TOO much of a difference from the previous two... I hope I pulled it off!

Thank you SO, SO much for your long, precise and very thoughtful reviews! I can't tell you how much they made my week, and I'm thrilled to see that you like the story! THANK YOU!


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