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Review:Remus says:
Heya!! :D Perelandra here once again! XD

Aww, poor Rose!!

I have to be honest, when I graduated high school and a few years after that I dreaded even thinking about my high school reunion. While it was many years away (though now its less than 5...) I had a lot of 'what ifs'. So this story brought those feelings back and I just felt so bad for her! Despite always being told to never put your happiness on someone else, its hard seeing your long time friends having a significant other, married, or with kids. Start feeling lonely. However, this story had a happy ending with Scorp finally making a move on her! Yay for Rose! :)

Anyway!! Your story was short but you were able to bring those emotions forth very well! The only critique that I have is that sometimes it felt too wordy. Perhaps, instead of using commas with some sentences, change it to a period. That way it'll flow a lot better.

--Rosie

Author's Response: Thank you for the suggestion, I will look into that in the future! I'm so glad that you were able to understand the emotions going through Rose and that you enjoyed the story! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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