Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Remus says:
Hey!! Perelandra here from the forums with your review!! Sorry that it took a while...I had to rest my eyes last night. Haha! But I'm here now! :D

You know, I still can't understand why some people dislike Snape/Lily stories. The love he had for her, their entire story (whether the author has Lily be with Snape or not) is always so tragic! We know how its going to end, its a train-wreck, but we just can't look away.

Writing in present tense, I think, is what makes the story. The way it flows is just amazing making me ache for Sev a lot more than I usually would in a Snilly story. The line that impacted me the most was on the first part "This has always been about the end" ugh, I knew right there that this was definitely going to make me cry.

I liked a lot of stuff in this fic but what I liked the most is Lily's evolution from a scared and innocent little girl to someone who is not a goody two shoes like others paint her. She has flaws but Snape still loves her and will never stop loving her. Some might call it obsession...others true love and devotion.

Anyway! I have nothing else to say aside from the fact that this was a well written story and that I loved it!

Thanks for requesting a review!

--Rosie

Author's Response: hi there!

I'm really happy you liked this. Lily's never been a goody two shoes in my head, but that's just how my mind works. I'm so glad you noticed that. And I'm so happy you liked this. Thank you for all your kind words. It really means a lot.

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net