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Review:PotterUnited says:
Hi, so happy you've updated. :D This is so dramatic! Love all the story lines.

One thing I'm confused about is all the different people the main characters know, and all of the people involved in last chapter's fight. Could you somehow include each of the characters separately in the later chapters, just so we get to know them better? :)

It would be absolutely fantastic if you could- would bring the story to life- even more than it is now :)

I love that other people are starting to know about the pregnancy.

And I'm looking forward to Charlie being back in the story.

Awesome chapter! Well done :D

Author's Response: oh sure! if that would help clarify everything, i'll definitely do that! thanks for letting me know!

your review made me so happy!
i'll definitely keep in mind everything you said.

thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :D

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