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Review:Remus says:
Alrighty! Perelandra here with your review! So! I would've been here sooner but I had some browser issues.but they're fixed now! *celebrate*

I'm glad that you requested a Bill/Fleur stories! I love those!

I really like the set up you have. We're seeing those moments we never heard of in the books. Bill actually being shy made me laugh a bit because I always imagined him being a lady's man and knowing how to talk to girls so when he made an inhuman noise due to seeing her, I just had to laugh. Its so cute!

"Her arms are wrapped snugly around his waist, her cheek against the curve of his back, and he tries to make himself remember that it is not Harry."--That line confused me! It took me a few seconds to remember The Seven Harrys chapter. Haha!

Favorite line: The thestral beneath them has suddenly faded into view--Without over wording it, you managed to tell us that they had seen Moody and how, within an instant, death came come.

And now I'm teary eyed! Fred's death is always the moment when I break down in DH. When I read it on my first go, I froze on that page, stared at it, put the book down and cried my eyes out. Could not believe it! You managed to bring that sadness with a few simple paragraphs and little dialogue. The wording, I think, is what worked perfectly! Very heart wrenching!

The last line though! With two worlds you managed to summarize what HP is all about.

This was both a lovely and bittersweet read!! :D Thanks for giving the the opportunity to read it!

--Rosie/Perelandra

Author's Response: Hey -- thank you so much again for doing this for everyone! That's really an awesome thing to see. You're an inspiration; I have half a mind to do something similar soon. And no worries about when you left the review, or anything like that. Seriously!

I'm so happy you liked this story, too. I'm fairly proud of it, even if I'm not quite sure where it came from, and it's not the sort of thing I normally write, you know? I just liked the idea, though, when I got to thinking about it. I didn't want to write out a whole fic about their relationship (though I probably could have), so I went for a sort of snapshot-form instead.

Ahaha, perhaps I should have made the allusion to the seven Harrys a bit stronger! I love that you caught the bit about the thestral, though; it's a slight thinker. ;) That line's also one of my favorites, though, and I love it when readers pull out lines I simultaneously enjoy! ♥

Thank you for offering to review this for me! I really am so, so grateful, and am very pleased to see you enjoyed it so much. :3 I hope to see you back soon!!

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