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Review:LittleMissPrincess says:
HELLO!(:
YAY! AIDEN/BELLA ACTION.
can this PLEASE be an aiden/bella story?
albus is like, non existent.
AND OMG aiden likes her! which is great! but sad because bella doesn't like him OR SO SHE THINKS but deep down, she DOES like him, but because shes a socially awkward penguin, she doesn't realize.
ALSOO. i thought rose and scorpius were dating?
ANDD I GUESSED IT WAS MATT!(: HOORAY! but yeah, so how come that wasn't mentioned? shouldn't bella have been mad at rose for cheating on scorpius?
wait, they are dating, right? im not sure anymore... meh too lazy to go back ans check :P
&when bella asked aiden about whether she was a prude, I THOUGHT HE WAS GOING TO KISS HER.
sad face :(
UPDATE SOON!(:

Author's Response: Hey!!
I have already figured out the end for Bella's romance in this story, and I'm not going to give it away just yet. Albus/Bella action is seen in the next chapter as well as some Aiden/Bella, so stay tuned! :)
Oh wow, I'm so sorry, it has been so long since I last read the beginning chapters of this story, I your review made me remember that I had Scorpius and Rose dating, so yes, I surpose she did cheat on him.. I shall go and fix up her reaction to that later and thankyou for pointing it out. Atleast that gives some new action into the storyline. Now I feel bad for Scorpius... aw. And yay for you for guessing correctly! Congrats!
Haha aw sorry for making you sad:(
I'll try get the chapter done in the next couple of days :)
Thanks for reviewing :)


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