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Review:inkwell says:
Ah, this is so sad!
Hermione remembering her parents as they were two years ago and them not having the slightest idea of who she is -- too sad! I wonder if you'll have them remember her, I thought that the memory charm could be reversed or something?

Ron's so sweet, I do feel bad for him. But I can get why Hermione gets annoyed with him, he's being a tad overprotective...

I love the feeling of this story in general and of the beginning of this chapter in particular. Hogwarts in wintertime and everything... Very gloomy, but in a captivating way.

Um. This is me trying to leave a review of "normal" size for a change, hee! ^_^

Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! :)

Author's Response: Hey Smashing Sophie,

Ahhh damn of course you caught straight on... Yes the charm is reversible, but she doesn't remember that, does she? And for the sake of this story, we'll pretend that everyone else thinks that it's a permanent memory wipe ;) but yes. You're right. Shhh

For this story, because all of characters are well known and established, I have to do my best to write how they would normally act.. Put myself in their shoes, as such. To me, Ron has always been a bit of an overprotective person, so I'm trying to reflect that.

Hehe thanks for another awesome review! They're my bread and butter. Hope you're well!

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