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Review:Akussa says:
That was a chilling chapter. I enjoyed it so much, I almost want to read it again (but I want to read the rest as well... hard decision...).

As much as I enjoy the slower, more introspective chapters such as the previous one, I have to admit that these action packed chapters you write are amazing. You were really creative, once again, when it comes to the characters' strategies to both win and protect themselves from the others.

I felt really bad for Fred in this chapter; Tonks' plan was very cruel to him. Anyone else would have been puzzled to find themselves facing a replica of themselves but Fred... I think he'll come out stronger from that though and that this will only be a motivation for him to win and get to see the real George once again. That's my theory now (I change with every chapter)!

Oh and I really loved the setting for this. Once again, this was original and so exciting! I feel like we've heard a lot about the goblin history through the books so it was a nice touch to use this moment in time.

Brilliant chapter, I really, really enjoyed it and can't wait to read the rest. On to the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Hey, Akussa!!

Out of all the chapters in this story, the duel ones were the hardest to write because I knew there would be certain expectations. This was good because it pushed me to write better, since I had built up to each round with three quiet chapters between them; I'm just endlessly thankful that people weren't let down by the duels. Capture the Flag was one of my favorite ones to write!

Poor Fred. :( You're right; if Cedric had found a replica of himself, he probably would have realized it was Tonks. But since it was Fred, it was only natural that he would see himself and see George instead. It definitely does serve as motivation.

Very happy that you liked the setting! I put a lot of effort into these, and into making each setting very different so that it wouldn't feel predictable or redundant. I've personally always had an interest in the goblin rebellion since hearing about it in the books, and so this was like a field trip for me to get to delve into that.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!


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