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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Well, howdy there lovely!

So while procrastinating against my homework, I decided to log onto HPFF and read something. I decided to check your author page, to see if I could find myself some goodies, and lookie what I've founds! :D

I like your whole concept of a Muggleborn in Slytherin. It's rather twisty, especially because she doesn't seem like a Slytherin in the first place. But that's why I'm reading on, right? So I can watch your character grow and develop.

You have a rather nice start here. And for a first timer, you're doing rather well. I remember my first hand at fanfiction, and well, let's just say I've flinched after reading it dozens of times. It was completely whack, and I wondered why my friends ever thought it was so good. So cookies, ice cream, and an applause to you, for starting on excellent foot!

I'll continue reading more later, only because I've got such an Umbridge of a teacher, and she'll smother me in her poisonous, motherly wrath tommorow if I don't do my chemistry homework. So ta-ta for now, but I promise, I'll get back to ya' on your other chapters!

See you around, lovely!

Pearl (AKA PhoenixPulse)

Author's Response: Oh Thank you so much! I loved your review!

Ahhh, yes the plotline..;) I'm glad you like it because honestly I myself hate the first chapter. I re-wrote it thrice! And thank you so much.. It means a lot to know that I'm doing well :D

Oh sure..:) Good luck with the homework! (I guess I'm too late though xD) Take your time..
Thank you once again for such an awesome review :)



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