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Review:XxImAgInAiReXx says:
This is pretty awesome. I love how Molly isn't just a stereotypical Seeker! You did a great job with keeping the stereotypes out of this, which is admirable, especially when working with the Weasleys. I can't say I ever thought that anyone would be prejudice against Percy, but now that you bring it up it seems more than possible.

I really love how you made Molly nervous about telling her Dad. Usually the Weasley kids are brave, up front characters, not really having their own fears and stuff. If you aren't working with the Weasley kid (and I do this too) then they fade into the background and just become a genaric Weasley, and I think Percy's kids are like this a lot, but you did a great job of making Molly her own character.

Also, I like that Molly and her father had a close relationship, even though they didn't agree on some things. This is with Lucy and Molly too. Usually we see in fics that Lucy and Molly don't like each other, or Molly/Lucy have so large of an age gap that they aren't close.

Basically, I realy love this fic and am going to read more. Yes. I'll do that now.

~Elle

Author's Response: Hi Elle, thanks for tagging! I haven't worked on this story in forever, and it's so cool to get some feedback on it :)

I feel like Next Gen has its established stereotypes about all the characters, plus everyone has their set ideas in mind about the Weasleys. I wanted to play around with creating a character that challenged stereotypes, and so Molly happened. I'm glad you like her! I wanted to make her a strong character, but also show her fears and weaknesses.

Lucy and Molly work really well together; the two of them are so different that they can point out each other's blind spots. And the same will be true about Molly and Percy too (that is, if I ever update.) They're more alike than Molly thinks, but they still have a lot to learn from each other.

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

--Maggie


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