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Review:Ardeith says:
Loved this chapter!! Great build up... I had noticed in the last chapter that all the things that Krum said could be construed as flirting.

Especially loved that Rose took control at the end. Yay, she wants this relationship, too!

I'd paste practically all the chapter into this box, but there are probably rules against it. Here are some of my favorite bits:

"He was staring at her so intently now she could almost feel her knees start to give way under the pressure. It was like they were standing together at the edge of a cliff. If she turned around and walked out that door, she might be able to save them both. But if she continued on, pushed just a little further, Rose knew she could send them both straight over the edge."

and:

"It had been a long time since Rose had felt like this, like she was on the precipice of something big. Something primal. Something raw and full of need."

and:

Rose shuddered once and said, “Then we better make this good."

Author's Response: Hooray! I'm so glad you liked this chapter. It's true -- Krum has been a big flirt but in the end it's Rose who really makes it happen.

And I'm so glad you pointed out those lines. That scene was a challenge to write, so it makes me really happy to know you liked those bits.

Thank you for the R&R!


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