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Review:luvdobby26 says:
Hey, it's hidden_secrets from the forums, here with a review as promised :D

This was a great one-shot! You did so well in such a small word limit and managed to create a story out of only 500 words!

I really liked your writing style, and even though you couldn't go into much detail here you seemed to make good use of the words and get the story across. It was clear what was happening and even though we don't get to know too much about the characters, we get to see what sort of person they are. So well done with that!

I liked the plot and how you made it fit with the actual books. I like how you did that! The flow was great, the pacing alike. Overall this was a short but sweet one-shot! Well done J

10/10

~ Eilidh xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking time to review even though it was for review tag! Sorry for the long wait concerning the answering, life has been very hectic these couple of weeks.

I'm glad you think so! Well I wanted to keep it canon and seeing we don't know much about her murder I decided to give it another twist. Her being dead because of lust/love than only being murdered because of the order.


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