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Review:True Author says:
Hello! I'm True Author with your requested review! =]
In spite of grammar and punctuation mistakes, this was a really good chapter. I'm glad you didn't waste your time writing about Ginny's conversation with her family. You have concentration on your plot and you mentioned Bill, Fleur and her parents were there so that thing is cleared too.
I won't bother you by picking grammar mistakes, but I think you need a good beta reader for grammar. Grammar brings clarity in a story having a serious plot like this. In general or humorous stories you don't think about the grammar much.
I enjoyed this! :)

Author's Response: I've actually now got a beta reader, and I now realize how much mistakes I have :D Thank-you very much with the review and not dwelling too much on grammar skills.
Thanks again
- kjp

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