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Review:Jchrissy says:
I love Lily! She's so adventures, and a contrast to what I usually see in next gen. So, I think you've chosen something really complicated to write about, but so far it is very well described! Everything makes sense and I love that you had some of the siblings wanting to call mum and dad, with the more adventurous (and possibly stupid) ones wanting to handle it on their own.

The story about Kara and Aron is so sad, I want him to be able to cross over so he can be with her again :(.

I love the way you're moving the plot forward, I don't think I've gotten anything close to bored during any of these chapters! I'm excited to read the next!!

Jami

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you like her because I really enjoy writing her. Yeah, a bit of planning went into this one. :P Yeah, whether they are being stupid or not is up to the reader...

Yeah, their story is sad. and not to worry, they will be reunited in the end ;)

Yay for not getting bored!


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