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Review:Jchrissy says:
YOU TOLD ME THE WEASLEYS WOULD KNOW SOON! AHH! Okay, this chapter is the only reason I haven't gone crazy lady killing spree today. I have been waiting for this wonderful moment the minute I saw your updates post and it did not disappoint.

I adored the love den in the first section. And how tempting (and romantic) is the idea of gathering blankets and pillows and having a very adult living room camp out? I love the small hints of jealousy we get from Viktor also.. and I have to say when Rose said the line about 'who said there's been other men?' my eyes/mouth popped open also. She fooled Krum and myself both, sneaky girl.

SO! IS STRANGE MAN OUTSIDE A REPORTER?? WILL TOMORROWS HEADLINES READ...'Viktor Krum, the former Quidditch heart throb and serial drug user, caught red handing slipping form Rose Weasley's (daughter of Ministry Officials Hermione and Ron Weasley) flat Monday morning. And by the looks of his disheveled clothing and hair, this reporter would have to say that he was doing a bit more than offering friendly tips on how one might get the Quaffle through the hole. Pun intended'

Okay, I hope the article is written a bit better than that one, but you get what I'm saying ;).

YOU SURPRISED ME! I completely expected Krum to react all 'that vasn't your business, you can't just talk to whoever you vant about me, certainly not one a dear friend of mine' and stomp out. But he didn't! Which I loved, because his reaction was much less predictable.

My heart broke for Rose at the end of this :(. Especially this new love she's feeling being nothing more than affair from all logical standpoints.. gah. Poor girl. We know the Weasleys must've heard about this, right? And I'll find our how they react next chapter. right?? So you'll spend the next hours slaving away to finish it..?

Thank you so much darling for just making my day! And for the sweet mention ♥ When you are a famous author I'm sending this chapter into some newspaper - that way I can prove to everyone I read your writing first ;).

Author's Response: What would I do without your wonderful reviews?! It's a good thing I don't get too many like this or my head might start to swell :D

I'm so glad you liked their little love nest. I have to admit, I'm not always sure where to draw the line on the romance parts. I don't want it to be all in the reader's face with mature content, but they are two adults... I thought making the bed into a fort would keep it on the playful side. And I couldn't resist with that line of Rose's. Krum is always teasing her; it was about time she returned the favor!

I debated on how Krum would react to the news. I felt like there was no way Liddy wouldn't have told him right away about the meeting. In the end, I think Krum trusts Rose so he's willing to go with it, though I like that he's unpredictable. I want him to overreact to things (like in the pub), just as much as he under-reacts to things, if that makes sense.

I'm still processing the ending myself. I think I said to you one time I didn't really want the characters to see their relationship as scandalous but she has to know that's how everyone else will see it. I'm still working on finding that balance.

And what can I say? You are right on all fronts about the next chapter. The Weasleys will know, the man outside the flat will return and I am definitely slaving away on it!

Thank you times infinity for being so supportive of my story. I can't lie; it really gives me a confidence boost!



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