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Review:megthechef43 says:
Sunflower,

I was a little sad when I realized you only have two chapters posted so far because I'm ready to read more of your story. It is intriguing to me. I'm enjoying the plot so far.

I'm horrible with Next-Gen because I haven't read much of it so Darren baffled me a bit. I feel as though I am missing something and I don't quite understand the closness between Darren and the Weasleys/Potters. Is this something that will be explained with time?? I got the feeling that he is Dom's ex but is that the only connection? I did like Darren quite a bit. He seems warm and caring.

I smiled to myself at the Scorpius's delight to be stuck in the backseat with James. Scorpius was amusing though why did he not apparate himself and Lucy to somewhere to get help?? Just wondering.

James' character was great in this chapter. He treatment of Lucy makes me wonder even more to what actually happened between Ted and Lucy.

BTW... I really like the flashbacks, they add so much depth to the story between what is going on now and what happened in the past.

Flow was good. I didn't get hung up at any point in the chapter and nothing stood out to me. I could tell this chapter was a filler but you had so much going on and information that it wasn't distracting or uninteresting.

I can't wait to read what you have in store for Lucy next.

Meg

Author's Response: Hi there! :)

Darren is Dom's ex, yes. He actually lives in Grimsby, but with his mother. He's Ted's best friend and kind of got pulled into the entire group through Ted. Ted, Darren, Vic and Molly were all in the same year = Darren knows all of them. Ted & Luce were together + best friends, so they know each other too, and Darren met Dom through Vic and Luce. I hope that made sense, if not, it'll get explained soon enough.

You're actually right about Scorpius; he could have just apparated couldn't he? Hm... Gotta look into that.

I'm so happy you liked James! He's a doll. And I'm glad the flashbacks weren't jarring. Yay. Thank you so much for all your kind words. This really means a lot. xx


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