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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there! I am finally here with your review and I just want to say that I am so sorry for taking this long to get to reviewing for you I have been quite sick.

I really liked this chapter and the way that they bonded. They really came together to act like true Slytherin's. I felt horrible for Louis, but was happy to see that he was starting to return to normal. I also thought it was really clever to see/read about Veela and what they become.

Daniel and Nathan really shinned in this chapter. They were able to stand up and prove themselves. I was highly annoyed with Miranda. She really bothers me. I was thrilled with the conversation between Albus and Greg. I think it gave Albus the much needed kick in the pants in order for him to see things for how they are not what they should be. Hope that makes sense.

I loved your description and the way you refrain from over using the word said. Everything was so clear in my mind as I read along and I really appreciate that.

Keep up the awesome writing! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Thank you very much :-) Glad you are feeling better.

I couldn't tie up one argument without starting another - it's all boring if everyone's friends!

I have been struggling with writer's block a little on this lately, but I've just finished the next chapter and I think I know where we're headed afterwards, too. I've also finished a one-shot on Matt & Oscar's first few days that will hopefully come up soon.

Thanks again

Sheriff


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