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Review:alicia and anne says:
I'm already terrified! Seriously terrified!
Fraternity? Bad guys! *shakes fist at them* Don't hurt all of my favourites!!
Poor Richie he looks so shocked and scared :-(
Who's killing! No I can't believe any of them are murderers, it must be someone else.
No Rose keep moving, you need to be safe :-(
Scorpius be careful!! *fights with them* Take that Fraternity!
NO! Not Richie! :-( He doesn't deserve this, he only wanted to meet a girl and have a date.
Oh no Scorpius, I'm so sad right now, why are you doing this to me? I'm almost a quivering wreck!
Rose needs to snap out of it! Please Rose snap out of it!
What on earth is that noise! *is scared still* oh no a werewolf, please don't let this end badly for anyone but the Fraternity.
Ok I must say that that scene was just amazing! The emotions you put across in that and the fighting, Rose falling apart and Scorpius acting like an animal, just oh my god! Amazing! just pure amazingness!
Oh Scorpius :-( He's such a good friend, the best.
WHAT! Oh my... what? Oh my that ending was so good!! when? how? why? How? What?! Seriously I need this next chapter!
I can't wait for more! Seriously can't wait!

Author's Response: Ah it'll all work out in the end *crosses fingers* probably :P
Richie didn't deserve to die, and he's the character I have ever been the most sad to kill. Is that any consolation? I'm so glad you liked the emotions in this chapter- I get really annoyed when characters don't feel the emotional effects of their actions, especially in action scenes, so I really tried to show it.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

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