|Review:||Gabriella Hunter says:|
I would have gotten to this alot sooner so you'll have to forgive me coming to this so late! I'm glad to be back with this story, I was really interested in where you were going to go with it and gasp! So much angst! Poor Lou though, I know how she feels, wanting James and getting into such a horrible fight like that. The fact that Alice was very hurt by his actions just spoke volumes, and the sad thing is that Lou comforted her when she really was just as upset about the situation. She's actually a very good friend because someone else wouldn't have decided to be so kind when they were down and giving Alice advice on what she should do about James? I know that had to have hurt! He's still totally into that Vivian girl you know? Hahahah. Anyway, I thought your play on all of their emotions was very well-done and realistic, especially when Lou and James make up. But now Lou is in a tight pickle jar because she's starting to move on from James but I'm wondering if she'll end up hurting Rob in the process? Argh, you must update soon okay? I love this story! :D I must know your secrets!
p.S.: I have a banner for A Force of Wills, totally let me know what you think and I'm currently trying to get one for This is Angelina. Anyway, Abandon is up now so you should totally check it out and then after Albus we're going back to Audrey and her Weasley. So, until then!
Author's Response: HELLO THERE!
Ah don't worry, I'm hopeless too (like I really need to go and review Abandon, like now). I love this story and I felt it was getting left behind so you might see a bit more of this for a while than some of my others. Poor little Lou, she's just pining for the unattainable :( Sometimes I wonder if Eloise is just too good a person, I need to give her some flaws... hLike the rest of my girls :L Oh Jamsie, he is definitly still into that Vivian girl! Thanks you :D I was a bit worried she just forgave him too easily... but this is Eloise I guess, and she is kinda, a little bit into that James bloke. Ah, you'll just have to wait and see ;) Don't worry I will be updating this one soon, as I said, it was feeling a little left behind. I've seen your banner, very snazzy ;) and I'll be curious to see This Is Angelina's banner too when it comes up :) Argh, I REALLY have to review Abandon, I've read both chapters but I was in a rush so didn't review and now I feel bad, so expect some reviews shortly :) Ms Tang, oh how I have missed you. See ya,