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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
I really liked this chapter, too. You write Scorpius so well and it's clear that there is plenty we're kept in the dark by what's going on inside of his mind. I'm curious what Scorpius is hiding, or shutting up inside of himself by refusing to acknowledge is feelings.

The description in this chapter was so rich that it went really well with the narration. It seemed to hold a classic feel to it, like a Jane Austen or Charlotte Bronte novel. It was refreshing, quite different from the majority of Next Generation stories on the site. I'm definitely intrigued how the characters all are related to the plot together that has so far been introduced (Lorcan, Lily, Scorpius...). I didn't read the summary (I usually don't... I just start reading without any thought because I like to be surprised) so I'm completely in the dark as I watch a little bit of light being shed yet still keep things relatively unknown. There's an almost eerie feel to the writing, like something is lurking in the shadows that might necessarily not have a form but is still there, waiting, in each of your descriptions (the edge of the cliff, the window, the old house, etc.). Anyway, excellent chapter, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter now.

Author's Response: Hurray! I'm so glad you liked this chapter. It used to be two chapters but I cut a whole bunch out and squashed them together. You might be the first person to read it in its edited form :)

I'm so pleased you found the chapter to be eerie. I wouldn't say creating atmosphere is my greatest strength as a writer but that feeling that something more is lurking is exactly what I was going for. Same with Scorpius; something unseen is lurking in him too. I'm also glad you are finding this to a different sort of next-gen. It's may favorite era to write because you get so much freedom with the characters.

Thank you for another lovely review. I hope that if you keep reading, you continue to enjoy!

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